KAALA ISHQ
Cast
–
Madhukar 25
(writer Archana yadav
Rekha 22 - collage ka last year contect no.
7905819455
Shalini 22 - collage ka last year Thane,
Maharashtra)
Madhurima 22 - collage ka last year
Madhusoodan 49 – government inter
collage teacher
Maa 46 – house wife
Madhu buaa 51
Shalini ke papa Kailash 50 - government inter collage teacher
Shalini ki Ammi 45
Shalini ka bhai Krishna 24 – UP
polis
Shalini ki bahan Nalini 18
Scene
one / evening/ indoor / Madhukar and Rekha
(Pancham restaurant men charo taraf chahal pahal hai
koi aa raha hai to kai ja raha hai koi
waiter ko bula kar order de raha hai to kahin waiter khane aur naste ki plate
liye ja raha hai, lekin pichhe kone ki seat par ekdam khamoshi hai. Ek laraka
aur ek laraki to baithe hai lekin donon ke bich sannata hai. Laraki ki aankhon
se lagatar aansoon bah rahe hai aur laraka afsosh aur becharagi ke sath baitha
hai. In dono ke name hai Rekha aur Madhukar.
(Donon
ek dusare se bahut pyar karate hain, bachapan ke dost hain, ek hi muhalle ke
rahane vaale hain, sath sath hi khelate khate bare huye hain.)
Madhukar
-
please Rekha… samajhane ki koshish karo… main bhi tumase bahut pyar karata hoo lekin
main… apane parivaar se bhi bahut pyar karata hoo…. Main papa ka vishvaas nahin
tor sakata…. Mujhe laga tha ki main sabako hamare bare men mana lunga… lekin
main kamayaab nahin huaa.
Rekha
-
(sisakate huye) tum jhooth bol rahe
ho…tumane mujhe cheat kiya hai…please Madhu main tumhare bina mar jaaungi
please … please is shadi se inakar kar do… main tumhare bina nahin ji sakati
please…., (rone lagati hai aas paas ke
log dekhane lagate hain to Madhukar ko
sharmindagi si mahashoosh hoti hai, vo Rekha ko chup karavaane ki koshish
karata hai)
Madhukar
-
Rekha yeh kya kar rahi ho… please chup ho jao yaar… sab dekh rahe hain…, mammy
ko to tum pahale se hi bilkul pasand nahin thi meri ummid sirf papa se hi thi …
jab tak main bat karata vo mera rishta tay kar chuke the… mujhe to is bare men
kuchh pata hi nahin tha… yakin karo mera….
Rekha
–
kya yakin karun main … kaise … kyu … kya kar rahe ho aisa tum … tumhare bahaane ka yakin krun…. Haan?
Madhukar
–
yaar….
Rekha
–
mujhase pyar karane se pahale nahin socha ke mana paaunga ya nahin… mere itane
karib aane se pahale nahin socha … mujhe chhune se pahale nahin socha … ke
apani family ko mana paoge ya nahin…(
roti hai)
Madhukar
–
pyaar kahan soch kar hota hai yaar… maine kabhi socha hi nahin tha ke aisa bhi
din aayega ekk din…
Rekha
–
din aaya… sabaki life men aate hain yaar … aur tum to kuchh kar hi nahin rahe
ho… apane pyaar ke liye fight nahin kar sakte…
Madhukar
–
kaise karun yaar … aur kisase … uss papa se jinhone apne vishvas par kisi gair
ko jabaan de di… main fight karta lekin papa ki ekk bat sun kar main ruk gaya,
vo bole meri jabaan ka sawal hai betava
naa mat kariha…
Rekha
–
( gussa hote huye) achchha … unaki
jabaan ka sawal hai aur jo tumane mujhase itane vaade kiye hain vo … unaka
kuchh nahin
Madhukar
–
esake liye sorry bol raha hoon naa…
Rekha
–
sorry … tumhari sorry lekar kya krungi main … chatungi… mujhe tum chahiye… main
kuchh nahin janati…. (rote huye) main
tumhare bina ji nahin paaungi yaar samajhate kyu nahin…
Madhukar
–
main jaanta hoon tum aisa kuchh nahin karogi …strong laraki ho tum … mere jaisi
kayar nahin… I am sorry yaar mujhe nahin pata tha ki papa aisa kuchh kar denge…
(Rekha
kuchh bhi sunane ko taiyaar nahin thi vo apani taraf se koi kasar nahin
chhorana chahati thi.)
Rekha
–
(giragira kar ) ab to pata ho gaya na
ab to mana kar do….
Madhukar
–
(ko samajhate huye bola) kaise mana
kar doon… tum to mere papa ko achchhi tarah se janati ho… unake liye pran jay
par vachan na jaye … aur tumhin batao unhonne apane tarbiyat par yakin karake
apane dost ko han kaha hai… fir main unake is yakin ko kaise tor doon… tumhin
batao…?
Rekha
-
Main kuchh nahin janati main bas etana janati hoo ki main tumhare bagair ji
nahin paungi….
(Silent bahas )
Rekha
–
to pakka hai tum uncle se bat nahin karoge….
Madhukar
–
I am sorry… (aankhon se aansu chhalak
jate hain to face niche kar ke aankhen band kar leta hai….)
(Rekha
ki aansuon par nazar jati hai to usaka bhi gala bhar aata hai jo abhi gusse men
thi, vo uth khari hoti hai usake paas aati hai gale se laga leti hai)
Rekha
–
I love you yaar… I really love you… jaisa tum chahoge vaisa hi hoga… aur esake
liye ekk din pachhataoge….
(Turant
chali jaati hai Madhukar dekhata rahata hai fir table par sar rakhakar rone
lagata)
Cut
to
Scene
two- day /indoor / Madhukar ka ghar / Madhusoodan aur Maa
(
Madhusoodan collage se aate hai Maa
unaka bag lekar rakhati hain vo ekk kursi par baith jaate hain… apane moje
nikalate hain tab tak Maa pani lekar aati hain unhen deti hain)
Madhusoodan
–
are kehu dikhat nay hav … kahin gayal hav ka sab…?
Maa
–
(baithate huye) are naahin … madhu suttal hav aur … Madhukar kahat rahal ki apane kawanon dost se milai
jaat hayin… vahin gayal hoyi…
Madhusoodan
–
kaho ketna baji gayal abahin tak suttali hav … tabiyat kharab hiyi gayal kaa
okar…(uthane lagate hain)
Maa
–
are naahin… vaisay aadat kharab hav … jab dari bheri naa rahi ta samay besamay
sutabai kari… choora … tu bataava kuchh kahat rahanai Shalini kai papa…
Madhusoodan
–
naahin kuchh kahat ta naa rahanai … lekin ham kahani dekhaa bhaii hamake dahej
vahej naa chaahi… na paisa na gaari na furniture na aur kavano saMaan bas hamre
bartihan kai dekh bhaal achchhe se kariha … unake khatirdari men kavanon kami
nay avai… kaahen se bhaai sab kuchh sab bhuli jaala khailakai piyalakai yaad
rahaila.
Maa
- tu kahen minahan kaila hai javan dihain tavan
apane bitiyavai ke dihain nai … onahin kai bitiya sukh kari javan dehale
rahihain … dusare ke kaamen thorai aayi….
Madusoodan
–
are paagal hau kaa … javan saMaan kai jarurat rahi o apane nay kharid leyi. Bhagavaan karihain ta
onahun kai PHD hoyi jaati hav… fir kehu ke dehale kuchh holaa ka…
Maa
–
ta tohaken kaa lagat hav Madhurima kai sadi vaisay ho jaai…
Madhusoodan
–
are chinta kaahen karat hau onakar ta abahin college chalat hav … jab javan
hoyi tavan dekhal jaayi….tani chay banavatu…
Maa
–
thik ha lai avat hayin…( uthakar juta
moja leti huyi chali jati hain aur Madhusoodan mobile me)
Cut
to
Scene
3- evening / indoor / Madhurima ka room / Madhurima aur Maa
(Madurima
soyi huyi hai Maa jati hai usake bed par baith jati hai )
Maa –
Madhurima are utha ho ketana soyibu …sanjhi hoyi gayil gadaa belaa men suttal
jaala… are uth na
(Madhurima
jag jati hai fir bhi uthati nahin hai)
Maa
–
achchha batav Madhukar ee sadi se khush
hav nai
Madhurima
–
kahen…?
Maa
–
jab se sadi tay bhayal hav tabase bara
udas dikhaila… o Rekhava se kavanon okar chakk….
Madhurima
–
(uthakr ) kaa mammy aap bhi kuchh bhi
sochai lu o sirf dost havai bachapan se
ekk sathe khelale kudale havain ta … tuhun nai ( vo uthkar chali jati hai)
Maa
–
aaj kal kai laikan kai dosti hamare samajh men naa availe …aur laika laiki men
kavan dosti… hamake ta kuchh auro lagat hav… lekin o Rekhava ke ta aapan patoh
naa banaib…vaise aisan kavanon baat rahat to Madhukar jarur kahat kuchh…. Lekin
okar papa ta sadi tay kay dehale batai abb kuchh nai kahay tabay thik hav….
Cut
to
Scene
4- night /indoor/ Rekha ka bedroom / Rekha
(Rekha
apane kamare men bahar se muskurati huyi aati hai , daravaaja band karati hai ,
kuchh der vahi khari rahati hai, fake muskan dhire dhire gayab hone lagati hai,
aankhen chalchala aati hai aansuon se, jaise andar se sunaami aa rahi ho aur khud
ko roke khari ho, fir aankhen band kar li. Kuchh der khud ko shant kiya fir
almari ke paas aayi use kholi ekk dress
nikali ekk doll nikali ekk photo ka electronic album nikali ek cigarette ka
pack ek couple T shirt jisaka LO Madhukar ke paas tha aue VE esake paas … sab
nikaal kar bed par faila diya , kuchh der dhyaan se dekhi fir baith gayi hathon
se ekk ekk chij utha kar dekhane lagi)
Rekha
–
(dress ko utha kar) esse to tumane
last month mere birthday par diya tha aur kaha tha ese tum haMaari sagayi men
pahananaa … sagaayi…( use sahalati hai
fir chum kar rakh deti hai) fir couple top uthati hai hathon se touch
karate huye muskurati hai…
Cut
to
Going to flashback -1
Scene
-5 / day /outdoor /market / Rekha and Rekha’s mom and shopkiper
(
shopkiper kapare dikha raha hai Rekha ke liye vo apane liye dekh rahi hai Mummy
bhi help kar rahi hai but usaki nazar bar bar stetu par jaa rahi hai but mammy
ke samane use lene ka soch bhi nahin sakati . fir kharidari karake vo dono
chale jaate hain fir kuchh der bad vapas aakar vo shopkiper se couple T shirt
le leti hai.)
Cut
to
Scene
6 – day /outdoor / park ki bench /Rekha and Madhukar
(Rekha
bench par baithi Madhukar ka intajaar kar rahi, samane se Madhukar dikhai deta
hai. Usake pas jati hai)
Rekha
– aa gaye … kab se intajar kar rahi tumhara…
Madhukar
–
haan … jara vo traific men fans gaya tha (gale laga kar ) sooorrryyyy….
(dono
bench par baith jate hain)
Rekha
–
mere paas tumhare liye kuchh hai…
Madhukar
–
kya hai…? Dikhao….
Rekha
–
vo kal main mammy ke sath market gayi thi to maine ekk couple T shirt dekhi ( bag se nikalati hai) maine le liya….( use de kar ) tumhe kaisi lagi…
Madhukar
–
achchhi hai…
Rekha
–
sirf achchhi….?
Madhukar
–
nahin bahut achchhi … bahut hi jyaada achchhi… bahut bahut bahut jyaada
achchhi…. Abb khush ….?
Rekha
–
jhooth…
Madhukar
–
areeee … sach men achchhi hai…. Main bhi lene ka soch raha tha par tum le aayi…
Rekha
–
hai naa…. Dekha ( in attitude )
Madhukar
–
hmm … (dekhte huye) esse ham apane
suhagrat ke din pahanenge…
Rekha
–
kya…? (chauk kar)
Madhukar
–
Hmm … suhagrat to sab ki hoti hai naa to hamari bhi hogi hi…
Rekha
–
Madhukar ke bachche….
Madhukar
–
Kidhar …. Vo kahan se aayenge… vo to suhagrat ke baad aayenge naa…
Rekha
–
Aaareeee….. ( Madhukar ko pakarane jaati
hai lekin vo uthakar bhaag jaata hai to vo bhi use daura leti hai )( masti aur hansi)
Cut
to
Flashback over
( muskaan abhi
tak chehare par hai, nazar cigarrete ke pack par gayi muskan gayab ho gayi ,
hath men liya pack khola to ekk cigarrete nahin tha, ek nikaalati hai… )
Cut
to
Going
to flashback 2
Scene
7 / day / outdoor/park men ekk jhari ke sath / Rekha aur Madhukar
(cigarrete
nikalati hai use dekhati hai fir dhire dhire munh ki taraf lekar jaati hai. Vo
pahali baar cigarrete pine jaa rahi hai. Hothon se daba leti hai fir machis ki
tin chaar tili jala lene ke bad bhi cigarret nahin jalati tab tak Madhukar aa
kar pichhe khara ho jata hai. Jab aabhaas hota hai to pichhe mur kar dekhati
hai to cigarrete munh se gir jata hai.)
Madhukar
–
( cigarrete utha kar) ye kya hai…?
Rekha
–
kahan…? Kuchh bhi to nahin….
Madhukar
–Tum
cigarrete pi rahi ho…?
Rekha
–
Nahin to….
Madhukar
–
Jhuth … fir ye kya hai…?
Rekha
–
Cigarrete …
Madhukar
–
Fir jhuth kyon bol rahi…
Rekha
–
Jhuth kahan bol rahi… pine ka socha… liya bhi… ekk munh men rakha … aadhi
machis khatam ho gayi lekin jail hi nahin… to piya kaise…?
Madhukar
–
To tumhen cigarrete pina hai…
Rekha
–
Haan….
Madhukar
–
Kyon…?
Rekha
–
Sab pite hain… mere class ki lagabhag saari larakiyan piti hai…. Aur tum bhi to
pite ho… to main kyon nahin pi sakati…?
Madhukar
–
Pagal ho kya…? Sab piyenge to tum bhi piogi… aur main kahan pita hoon … kab
dekha mujhe….
Rekha
–
Bachchu mujhase mat bolo thik hai dekha hai maine tumhen pite huye… abhi kal hi
dekha mainne…
Madhukar
–
Areeee… chup chup chup… pagal ho kya … thora dhire bolo…
Rekha
–
Kyon…
Madhukar
–
vo to main kabhi kabhi pi leta hoon roj
thore pita hoon… aur sab piyenge to tum bhi piogi… pagal achchhi ciij nahin
hoti….
Rekha
–
To fir tum kyon pite ho…?
Madhukar
–
Main to vaise hi pi leta hoon kabhi kabhi… haaan to larake to pite hi hain
lekin larakiyon ka pina mujhe bilkul pasand nahin hai.
Rekha
–
Waah ji waah… larake piye to thik larakiyan piyen to pasand nahin… cigarrete
bhi pine ka adhikaar sirf larakon ne hi le rakha hai kya…?
Madhukar
–
Main kahan kah raha ki larakiyan na piyen lekin tum nahin pi sakati kyon ki tum
sab larakiyon jaisi nahin ho naa… tum special ho … bahut special (dono hathon se Rekha ka chehara tham leta
hai).
Rekha
–
Chhoro… tum bhi to sab larakon jaise nahin ho… tum bhi to special ho… bahut
special ho… to tum kyon pite ho … chhor do…
Madhukar
–
Are yaar tum to mere pichhe hi par gayi…
Rekha
–
Haan… tum pikar mar jao aur main vidhawa ho jaun yahi chahate ho naa. Jo main
hone nahin dungi. Main bhi piungi aur tumhare sath hi marungi….
Madhukar
–
Ooooo… lelelelel… cigarrete pine se kaun marata hai… aur agar main mar bhi gaya
to duniya men aur bhi larake hain main aakhiri to nahin… bahut milenge tu…
(jhat
se koller pakar leti hai Madhukar ki bat bich men cut jati hai vo samajh nahin
pata ki Rekha kuchh aisa karegi. Vo sambhal nahin pata pichhe ki taraf hota hai
aur jamin par lat jata hai. Sath hi Rekha bhi lekin koller nahin chhorati)
Rekha
–
Fir agar aisi bat ki naa … to tumhen main jaan se Maar dungi…
(Madhukar
hansane lagata hai lekin Rekha ki aankhon se aansu aane lagate hain to vo chup
ho jata hai aur Rekha ko gale se laga leta hai)
Madhukar
–
Pagal ho kya… har chhoti chhoti baat par rone lagati ho. Main to Mazak kar raha
tha… yaar etana pyaar mat karo mujhase … main esake kabil nahin hoon… aur
please rona band karo…(chirhate huye)
nahin to main bhi rone lagunga.
(Rekha
uth jati hai. Madhukar ko chapat lagati hai fir apane aansu saf karati hai. Madhukar
bhi uthata hai use hansaane ki koshish karata hai)
Madhukar
–
O bandariya… rokar sara mackup kharab kar liya… dekho kaisi lag rahi ho.
(hansane ki koshish karata hai)
Rekha
–
Chup karo… yad rakhana fir aisi baat ki naa… to…
Madhukar
–
To…?
Rekha
–
Khud mar jaungi…
Madhukar
–
Hey…
Rekha
–
Sach kah rahi … aur tumhen kasam hai meri jo aaj ke bad cigarrete ko kabhi
haath bhi lagaya to …
Madhukar
–
Thik hai… par tum bhi kabhi try mat karana…. Sab jo man vo Karen lekin tum
nahin okk…
Rekha
–
Hmmm… ( cigarrete ka pack hath men lekar
band kar deti hai.)
Cut
to
Flash
back over
(cigarrete
ke pack ko rakh deti hai. Fir doll ko uthati hai. Usake munh ko sahalati hai
bachground men aavaj aati hai – Rekha…
Cut
to
Going to Flash back 3
Scene 8/ day/ outdor/ school
se ghar aate /sarak /madukar and Rekha
(School
ke uniform men Rekha cycal se sarak par aa rahi hai jab Madhukar (uniform men)
usake saamane bike rok deta hai. Vo
girate girate bachati hai)
Madhukar
–
Arererere… sambhal kar …
Rekha
–
Kya hai… bich raste men kyon rok kar khare ho gaye … koi dekhega to kya
sochega…
Madhukar
–
Are esake pahale ham nahin bat karate the kya …? Tab koi nahin sochata tha… abb
propose kar diya to log sochane lagenge… unhen pata hai kya…
Rekha
–
Kya …?
Madhukar
–
Ki maine tumhen propose kar diya….
Rekha
–
Pagal ho kya…
Madhukar
–
Tab … ye to pahale bhi hota tha … to koi kyon sochega… agar sochata bhi hai to
kya fark…?
Rekha
–
Kyon nahin fark …?
Madhukar
–
Chhoro… tumhare jaisi ekk laraki dekhi maine kal… mujhe bahut pasand aayi main
use apane sath le aaya…
Rekha
–
Kaun… kahan hai…
Madhukar
–
Mere sath … mere paas …
Rekha
–
Mazak mat karo… batao kaun hai..?
Madhukar
–
Mazak nahin kar raha… sach men bilkul tumhare jaisi hai… mujhase raha nahin
gaya … maine kaha mere sath chalogi to vo taiyaar ho gayi fir main use sath le
liya… tumhen bura to nahi lagega naa agar main usake sath bhi rahunga to…?
Rekha
–
Mujhe kya pari hai… tum larakon ki to
fitarat hi yahi hoti hai… mere sath ekk mahina bhi nahin huaa tumhari pasand
badal gayi… ( jane lagati hai)
Madhukar
–
Are ruko … maine kaha naa bilkul tumhari tarah hai… apani hamsakal ko dekhana
nahin chahati ho kya…?
Rekha
–
Bhaar me jaay… (cycal lekar chal deti hai
to vo bhi pichhe se aakar ekk baar fir rasta rok kar khara ho jata hai.)
Madhukar
–
Kitana gussa karati ho yaar… (doll bag se
nikal kar use deta hai) yahi hai tumhari hamsakal sautan….
(
Rekha hath men lekar hansane lagati hai)
Madhukar
–
Hai naa bilkul tumhari tarah….
Rekha
–
Tum bhi na paagal ho… main ti dar hi gayi thi… haan bilkul meri tarah hai . (usake face par anguli firati hai)
Cut
to
Flash
back over
Rekha
–
Bilkul meri tarah ho tum… tum Madhukar ka diya huaa pahala gift ho… vo bhi naa
pagal hai… ( rakh deti hai)
(Fir album uthati hai, on karati
hai, sari pics dekhati hai aur har pic clik hote aur hone se pahale banane vale
pose ko sochati hai. Kuchh pic usane bata kar liya tha kuchh bina bataye hi,
sabako dekhate huye aage barhati hai. Ek pic par thaharati hai jahan vo LOVE
vali T shirt pahane dono hain Madhukar ko touch karati hai … fir off karake lat
jati hai.)
Rekha
–
kitani sari baten kahi thi tumane … ekk bhi naa puri kiye… kam se kam ekk bar
uncle se baat kiye hote vo kuchh to kahate… pyaar karane ka dava karate ho …
aur etane bujdil ho… main bhi larati tumhare liye agar tum pichhe naa hatate…
main kaise larun… kisase larun… kisake liye larun… jab tumhin haar Maan gaye
to…(roti hai)… mujhe pyaar ka ahasaas karvaane vale agar pata hota to kabhi
accept nahin karati … bhale kitane bhi achchhe lagate…. Aahhhh mera khud par
kaabu hi kahan tha …, bachapan se sath hi khelate khate bare huye kabhi socha
hi nahin tha ki tum se pyaar hoga mujhe… vo pahala din tha jab tumhari vajah se
mere dil ki dharakanen barhi thin (muskurati hai aur un bite dinon ko yaad
karati hai)
Cut
to
Going to Flash back 4
Scene 9/ day / Madhukar
ka ghar/ indoor/ Rekha Madhukar aur Maa
(Rekha school uniform men hai Madhurima
ko bulaane aayi hai school jaane ke liye. Madhurima Madhukar aur Rekha tinon
ekk sath hi school jate hain )
Rekha –
chachi Madhurima taiyaar hoyi gayil .
Maa –
Rekha … are okar tabiyat kharab hav … aaj oo nay jaayi…
Rekha –
aaaa Madhukar….?
Maa –
oo jayi… taiyar hoyi gayal hav aavat havai….
(Madhukar bag lekar aata hai)
Rekha –
Kitana time lagata hai… kabase intajar kar rahi… pagal larakiyon ki tarah
sajata hai( hansane lagati hai aur dono cycal lekar nikalate hain)
Madhukar –
( chutiya khichate huye) achchha
chlaa…
Rekha –
Chachi dekha ehai… ( dard se chillati
huye ekk chapat lagati hai fir dono school ke liye nikalate hain)
Cut
to
Scene10
/ day / sarak/outdor / Madhukar and Rekha
(dono cycle se school ki taraf jaa
rahe hain Madhukar aage hai Rekha pichhe. Tabhi achanak Rekha ke salvar ki
mohair cycle ke chain men fans jaati hai. Na cycle chalati hai na pair niche
rakhaata hai taaki cycle rok sake. Fir Madhukar ko aavaj deti hai tab tak cycle
lekar gir jaati hai. Fir Madhukar paas aata hai dekhata hai to ghutane men chot
lagi hai khoon nikal raha hai panje par bhi cut laga tha haathmen bhi laga hai.
Rekha dard se tarap rahi hai , Madhukar use daantata hai.)
Madhukar –
kaise chala rahi thi… gir gayi naa.. cycle chalaane to aati nahin hai aur jaana
hai cycle se … kidhar dhyaan tha tera…
Rekha –
daant kyu raha hai… salwaar fans gayi thi.
Madhukar –
To salwaar pahanane ki kya jarurat hai…?
Rekha –
Kya…?
Madhukar –
Areee matalab etana niche pahanane ki kya jrurat hai thora oopar pahanana
chaahiye, school men pahunchane ke baad niche kar leti…
Rekha –
Haan yahan se main bhagori ban kar jaati…. Mujhe etani tez chot lagi hai aur tu
mujhe daant raha hai….
Madhukar –
Ghutane men bhi lagi hai…?
Rekha –
Haan….
Madhukar –
Dekhane de mujhe ….
( ghutane ki chot dekhane ke liye
salwaar opar karane lagata hai ki ekk tir sa chubhata hai sine men aur pure
sharir men ekk lahar si daur jati hai. Rekha haath pakar leti hai, Madhukar
usaki taraf dekhata hai, fir khara ho jata hai, ghabarahat chehare se saf
jhalakati hai. Tez tez heart beat sunaayi deti hai jaise lambi race laga kar
aaye hon dono.)
(Rekha jo karahana bhool gayi thi
fir karahane lagati hai.)
Madhukar
– a… aabbb … abb kya karegi… school kaise
jayegi…
Rekha
–
Bahut dard ho raha hai… ghar jaaungi…
Madhukar
–
Kaise … chal main tujhe chhor dun…
Rekha
–
Areee tujhe late ho jayega … tu jaa main chali jaungi…
Madhukar
–
(Normal ho kar ) jyada bhav na laga
abb… tujhe chhor dunga , ruk teri cycle kahin chhipata hoon,
Rekha
–
Are koi utha le jayega…
Madhukar
–
To kya huaa… kabara hi to hai…
Rekha
–
Haan to kharid kar de de nayi…
(Madhukar
Rekha ki cycle vahin chhipa deta hai sarak ke kinare , fir use sahara dekar
apani cycle par baithata hai, gar ki taraf chalata hai, Rekha jo usaki cycle k
pichhe baithi hai use pakarane se hichakati hai. )
Madhukar
–
Pakar le sahi se nahin to fir gir jaayegi … jo ess baar giri to daant bhi toot
jaayenge. (hansata hai)
Rekha
–
Tujhe bari hansi aa rahi hai na … ess baar giri to tujhe lekar girungi… ekk do
haddy to teri bhi tutegi…
Madhukar
–
Tabhi to kah raha sahi se pakar le…
(pahale
shirt pakarati hai chutaki se fir mutthe se fir Madhukar hath pakar kar sahi se
kangan baandh kar pakarava deta hai fir chalata hai (romantic feeling ).
Cut
to
Scene11
/ Rekha ka ghar / day /indoor/Maa and Madhukar
(Rekha
ko cycle par vapas laate dekh usaki Mummy pareshaan hoti hai. Daurkar usake
paas aati hain.)
Maa
–
kaa bhayal Rekha ke …?
Madhukar
–
Chachi … cycle chalavai ke sahoor ta hav nay chalaini cycle chalavai… bich
sarakiai men giri gayini hain…
Maa
–
Kaaa …? Jyada ghaav ta naa lagal nai…. Kaisan laaparvaah laraki hav … ham kaa
Karin ekar…
Rekha
–
Mummy … raste bhar hamape ee chillat aayal hay, abb tuhaun shuru hayi gayilu…
hamare ghaav lagali hav darad hot hav…
Maa
–
Haaan… ta ghaav lagali hav ta darad naa hoyi…..
(
Madhukar aur Rekha ki Mummy use cycle se utarate hain aur ghar ke andar lekar
jaate hain.)
Cut
to
Scene12
/ bedroom / indoor/Maa, Madhukar ,Rekha
(Mummy
aur Madhukar Rekha ko bed par sulaate hain.)
Maa
–
Are are aaram se… tu aram kar ham haldi dudh lai aavat hayin…
Rekha
–
(ghari ki taraf dekh kar) abb to kafi
late ho gaya teri bhi kyhutti ho gayi.
Madhukar
–
Haaan… teri vajah se …sahi se chalana nahin aata jo girati parati rahati hai…
(Madhukar
ki nazar fati samij ke andar se dikhate pet par jaati hai to vo ruk jaata hai
fir ekk kshan baad vo kambal use orha deta hai…)
Rekha
–
Are paagal hai kya … etani garmi men kambal kyon orha raha hai…?
Madhukar
–
Bas aise hi … orhane ke liye hi rakha hai naa to orh le….
Rekha
–
Arererere….
(Hataane
orhaane men fir haath touch hota hai to dono
ruk jaate hain. Samajh nahin aa raha ye kya ho raha hai aaj … ham to
bachapan se aise karate the… aaj achanak kya ho raha…. Fir Madhukar chhor deta
hai aur vahan se chal deta hai Rekha bhi kambal nahin fek paati…)
(Dudh
lekar Rekha ki Mummy andar aati huyi milati hain)
Mummy
–
are Madhukar kaahen jaat hava…? Baitha…
Madhukar
–
Naahin chachi… abb school naa gaini ta
gharavai kuchh likhi parhi…
(ekk
nazar Rekha ki taraf dekhata hai fir chala jaata hai.)
Maa
–
Toke thandi lagati hav kaa javan kambal orhi lihali…?
Rekha
–
Haaan .. halki halki….
Maa
–
Haaan ghav lagali hav nai ta dehiyan dhadhakat hoyi… bokhaar bhi aay sakat hav
toor papa aavai ta davaayi ke lai jaaayn…
(
dudh deti hai to Rekha thora sa utakar piti hai)
Cut
to
Scene
13/day/ indoor/ Madhukar ka bedroom/ Madhukar
(Madhukar
kapare change karake copy kitab khol kar parhane baitha hai lekin aaj jo huaa
usake bare men soch raha hai)
Madhukar
–
aisa kyon huaa… aisa to shayad cruss ke sath hota hai to kya Rekha meri cruss
hai… nahin nahin (dimag ko jhataka deta hai) to fir aisa kyon huaa (yaad aata hai ) muskuata hai) kya …
mujhe Rekha kis angle se achchhi lagane lagi
(khud par gussa hota hai) aaaahhhh …. DiMaag kharab ho raha hai mera… Rekha
aur mera cruss…
(uthakar
paani pita hai bhari huyi botal aadhi kar deta hai)
Madhukar
–
Yaar … bachapan … jab se yaad aata hai vo yaad hai mujhe… kitana marata tha
main use … vo bhi mujhe Maarati thi… vo to meri cycle par bhi bahut baithi hai
aur dark ke karan jakar kar pakarti hai lekin aaj ka baithana …. Aur uss tarah
se mujhe pakarana bahut alag tha … aaj usamen … kuchh nayapan dikha mujhe. ( sochata hai) maine kabhi dhyaan hi
nahin diya lekin chuhiya… sundar hai…
(let
jaata hai aur usake bare men sochata hai jab touch huaa tha haath yaad aaya to
heart beet tez ho gayi vo sine par haath rakh kar mahsoos bhi karata hai fir
muskurata huaa usake bare men sochata hai.)
Cut
to
Scene
14/ day / indoor / Rekha ka ghar/ Rekha, madurima, Madhukar
(Rekha
do saptah baad school jaa rahi hai Madhurima pahale se hi usake ghar par baithi
hai. Madhukar ko bulaati hai. Madhukar bahar aata hai, Rekha ko dekhata , Rekha
pahale se hi simati jaa rahi hai , abb Rekha ke samane aane par ghabaraahat
hone lag rahi hai heart beat tez ho jaa rahi hai. Ekk kshan Rekha ko dekhata
hai fir gussa dikhate huye kahata hai…)
Madhukar
–
tum dono rengate huye chalati ho …aao ekk sath… mujhe der ho jati hai roz… tum
logo ke sath mujhe nahin jana .. samajhi…
(Rekha
samajh jaati hai ki kya kah raha aur kyon…)
Madurima
-
(chillate huye) bhaiya … bhaiya….
Bhaiyaaaa….
Rekha
–
chalo naa use jaane do … (dono nikalati
hai)
Cut
to
Scene
15 /day / indoor/ Madhukar ka ghar/ Rekha , Madhukar
Rekha
–
(sochate huye aa rahi hai ) kahin Madhukar na dikh jaay… vaise hai kahan… Madhurima
se notebook lekar rukungi nahin main… dikh nahin raha… koi nahin hai kya…? (sochate huye ghar ke andar aa rahi hai)
(Madhukar
kitchen men paani pii raha hai kisi ki aahat milati hai to botal rakh kar
baahar ki taraf aata hai to samane Rekha dikhati hai. Heart beat tez chehare
par ghabaraahat. Rekha vahin ruk jaati hai dhire dhire fir Madhukar hi Rekha ke
karib jata hai..)
Rekha
–
(man men ) v vo vo Madhurima …. (baar baar)
Madhukar
–
(man men) kahan jaa rahi ho…(baar baar)
Rekha
–
v… vo…vo madhu…kahan hai… dikh nahin rahi… (aavaj jaise taloo se chipak gai
thi kitani mushkil se bahar nikali.)
Madhukar
–
Vo… Mummy ke sath market gayi hai… (Madhukar
bhi gala tar karake bola)
Rekha
–
Achchha….? Fir main chalati hoon… usi se kuchh kaam tha…
(vo
jaane lagati hai tabhi aage barh kar Madhukar hath pakar leta hai… kuchh samajh
paati esake pahale hi khich kar gale se laga leta hai… Rekha shok rah jaati hai
bilkul shunya. Kuchh der tak gale lagaaye rahata hai fir kiss karane ko barhata
hai, hotho tak pahuchane se pahale hi hosh men aa jati hai aur munh ghuma leti
hai. Madhukar thora khisiyaata hai hai fir pakar kar saamane karata hai aur Maathe
ko chum leta hai. Pakar kamajor parati hai to Rekha bhaag nikalati hai. Madhukar
use dekhata rahata hai.)
Cut
to
Scene16
/day/ Rekha ka bedroom/ indoor /Rekha
(bhagati
huyi Rekha apane kamare men jati hai aur andar se darvaaja band kar leti hai.
Saanse fool rahi hain . dam lene ke liye aankh band karati hai to Madhukar kiss
karane ke liye barhata dikhata hai. Aankh khul jaati hai . vo bed par jaakar
takiya men munh chhipati hai lekin fir dikhata hai. Vo uth kar bathroom men
jaati hai. Munh dhoti hai taaki taro taza ho sake. Vapas aati hai to shish eke
samane khari hoti hai. Muskurata chehara laal par raha hai.)
Rekha
–
Ye kya thaa…(sine par hath rakhati hai)
kahin mujhe Madhukar se pyaar to nahin ho gaya…
Cut
to
Scene17
/day/ Madhukar ka bedroom/ indoor
(Madhukar
bed par kitab kholkar sine par rakhe, mathe par baanh rakhakar so raha hai .
smriti men Rekha aur vahi scene hai. Uth jata hai . shish eke samane khara ho
jata hai.)
Madhukar
–
Ye kya kiya maine … kitani sharm aa rahi hai… lekin job hi ho bahut achchha lag
raha hai… kahin mujhe pyaar to nahin ho gaya Rekha se…?
(
fir dono apani apani mobile uthate hain number nikalate hain contect list se
lekin touch karane jate hain fir ruk jaate hain. Fir mdhukar call kar deta hai
aur Rekha usi samay call karane jaa rahi thi touch huaa call recive ho gaya.
Kan se lagayi.)
Rekha
–
(sirf sanson ki aawaz)
Madhukar
–
hello… Rekha…gussa ho kya? …yaar pata nahin vo sab kaise ho gaya… lekin… ek
baat bataun tumhen … tumhen pata hai tumhen dekhate hi meri dharakanen bahut tez ho jati hain ek ajib si
bechaini hone lagati hai… mere poore sharir
men ek sarsaraahat si hone lagati hai… tumhen pata hai aisa kyon hota hai?
Rekha
–
nahin…
Madhukar
– mujhe lagata hai ki mujhe tumase pyar ho gaya hai…tumhen kya lagata hai…?
Rekha
–
Mujhe bhi lagata hai.
Madhukar
-
....Rekha…. I love you…
Rekha
–
I love you too…
( silent conversesson)
Cut
to
Scene
18/ night/ indoor / Madhukar aur Rekha phone par
(
12 bajane vale hai )
Madhukar
–
kal mera birthday hai tum etana bhi nahi kar sakti … kaisi girlfriend ho meri
Rekha
–
Yaar zid mat karo … mai gift dungi naa … lekin jo tum chah rahe ho vo abhi nahi
de sakti …
Madhukar
–
Kyu yaar … mujhe 12 baje correct chahiye … mera birthday shuru hote hi…
Rekha
–
Pagal ho kya Mummy papa abhi tak jag rahae hain …
Madhukar
–
Yaar mera diMaak na kharab karo chichi tumhare paas kis liye aayengi etani rat
ko ... aur mere paas to kal aana hai abhi mujhe phone men hi chahiye…
Rekha
–
….
Madhukar
–
Rekha… ess bar ka mera birth day kitana special hone vala hai… girl friend jo
hai meri…
Rekha
–
Jyada uro nahin … girl friend aisa kuchh nahin karegi…
Madhukar
–
Kyu yaar… ab sirf do minit bache hain …
Rekha
–
Tumhari family aati hogi wish karare… me call cut kar rahi hoon…
Madhukar
–
Are pagal ho kya pahle tum karogi turant aur call cut nahin hoga haan kuchh
bolana nahin okk
Rekha
–
Hmmm
Madhukar
–
Time ho gaya mera gift…
(Mummy
papa aur Madhurima aate hain)
(Ekk sath)
happy birth day too you Madhukar (birthday song)
(
Madhukar sabke pair chhuta hai madurima ko gale se lagata hai sab gift dete
hain fir chale jaate hain)
Madhukar
–
Hello … Rekha … so gayi kya
Rekha
–
Nhi to… tum kab dogi mera gift …
Rekha
–
Kal …
Madhukar – Nahin … mujhe aaj hi chahiye….
Rekha
–
Zid na karo … rat bahut ho chuki hai me
call cut kar rahi hoon… abb kal bat karate hain…
Madhukar
–
Nahin … aaj me tumase puri rat bat karunga …
Rekha
–
Kis se …
Madhukar
–
Aaahhh… tumase aur kis se…
Rekha
–
Mujhe to nid lag rahi… good night…
Madhukar
–
Hey… I am birthday boy naaa? Mera gift kahan hai
Rekha – Oooo … kal milega…
Madhukar – Nahin mujhe abhi chahiye
Rekha –
Okkk bye good night good night…
Madhukar –
Phone cut kar deti hai
(ekk massage
type karati hai –I love you. Aur send kar deti hai . Madhukar dekhata hai gusse
vala emogi bhejta hai jise dekh kar Rekha muskurati hai)
Cut
to
Scene
19 / night/ Madhukar ka ghar/ birthday party/ indoor
(Birth day ki
party chal rahi hai bhir lagi hai ghar saja hai pura party ka mahaul hai…)
(Rekha aaj
special taiyaar huyi hai pile rang ke froksut men gajab lag rahi hai. Aate hi
vo sabase pahale Madhukar ko dekhati hai lekin vo kahin dikhai nahin deta . Madhurima
ke paas jati hai)
Madhurima -
Aree yaar kitana sundar lag rahi hai…
Rekha –
Achchha…?
Madhurima -
Haan… sach men…
Rekha –
Tu bhi achchhi lag rahi hai…
Madhurima -
Achchha…?meri dost hokar tu hi sabase let aayi… cake cut jane ke bad aati…
Rekha –
chhor naa… abhi kata to nahin… vaise
dikhai nahin de raha… hai kahan…?
Madhurima -
Bhai sahib taiyaar ho rahe hain dulhan ki tarah… aur pata nahin subah se kya
bigara hai sidhe munh baat hi nahin kar raha.
(Rekha samajh
jati hai kyon vo muskarati hai)
Madhurima -
Abb tujhe kyon laafter soojh raha …. Muskura kyon rahi ho…
Rekha –
Aise hi … birthday hai naa to extra attention chahata hoga…
Madhurima -
Haan … jaise …
(Rekha ki heart
beat tez ho jati hai vo palat kar dekhati hai to pichhe se Madhukar aa raha
tha. Gulabi rang ke shirt me vah bhi koi rajkumar lag raha hai. Sach men aaj
special din tha . kitana samay laga dukan men kapare ko select karane men agar
etane sundar dono lag rahe hain to esake pichhe bahut mehnat lagi hai)
(Vo aata hai
baron ka pair chhukar aashirvad leta hai Rekha ki taraf dekhata bhi nahin. Rekha
dukhi hoti hai .dhire dhire usaki ignorness rulaane lagati hai.)
Rekha –
(sochate huye) aisa kyon kar raha hai … etana taiyaar
huyi esake liye … ekk nazar dekha bhi nahin… aisi bhi kya zid….
(cake katata hai
fir sab men baanta jaata hai sath hi sneks aur cold drink bhi . dj chal par
dance bhi shuru hai . abhi tak Madhukar ne Rekha ki taraf ekk nazar bhi nahin
dekha hai janboojh kar ignor karana dukhi kar raha hai. Vo Madhurima ke sath
baithi kha rahi hai lekin dhyaan Madhukar ki hi taraf hai jo apane doston ke
sath dance kar raha hai)
Rekha –
(sochate huye) khud ko samajhta kya
hai… abb main bhi nahin bolungi… bara aaya (
cold drink uthati hai pine ke liye glass hath se chhut jata hai aur sara drink
usake kaparon par gir jata hai. Dag na lage esliye vo Madhurima ke
bathroom men jati hai)
(Madhukar dance
karate karate pasina pasina ho raha hai to vah bhi thora aaram karane ka kah
kar jata hai( Rekha ko jata huaa dekh leta hai)
Cut
to
Scene20
/ night / madurima ka bathroom indoor/ Madhukar, Rekha
(Rekha apne sut
ko dho rahi hai ki pichhe se Madhukar aata hai. Get par khara ho jata hai)
Madhukar –
mera gift kab degi…
(Rekha chauk
jati hai)
Rekha –
Kaisa gift… main kyun dun…?
Madhukar –
Achchha … fir kaun dega …?
Rekha –
Jisase man kare jaake le le …
Madhukar –
Achchha (baju pakar kar khichata hai aur
diwal se lagaata hai)
Rekha –
Ye kya kar raha hai… koi dekh lega … chhor mujhe…
Madhukar –
Kaun… kaun dekhega… sab party men busy hain… aur tune hi to kaha jisase man
kare usase main gift le lun… vahi lene jaa raha…
Rekha –
P … pa…. paa…. Gal…. paagal hai kya…
(Madhukar kiss
karane jata hai lekin niche jhuk kar bahar bhagati hai . fir lapak kar Madhukar
pakar leta hai.)
Cut
to
Scene
21/ night/ Madhurima ka bedroom/ indoor/Rekha
Madhukar
Madhukar –
Achcha bachchu … bhaagogi mujhase… kitana…?
Rekha –
Kya kar rahe ho… chhoro mujhe…
Madhukar –
Bina gift liye kaise…?
Rekha –
Kyon dun main… ekk bar bhi meri taraf dekhe… ajanabiyon se bhi badatar
vyavahaar kiya tumane…
Madhukar –
Dekha nahin to aaya kaise…? Tumhari tarah ghoorata main bhi tumhen…
Rekha –
Kya…?
Madhukar –
Aur nahin to kya… fir tumhen dekhana etana aasan hai kya utane logo ke bich
men…. Control kaise karata … vaise hi karana mushkil ho raha tha
Rekha –
Kya…. Chhi chhi chhi chhi kitane gande
ho tum…
Madhukar –
GhuMaao nahin … gift do mera…
Rekha –
Achchha … himmat hai to le lo khud hi…
(khud ko chhura
kar bhagati hai gat ko kholane kundi khol leti hai tab tak Madhukar pahuch kar
band kar deta hai. Dono haath pakar kardarvaje se Rekha ko tika deta hai)
Madhukar –
Aaj tumhari ekk bh nahin chalegi… kal phone par thi to bach gayi … aaj to
chahiye … aaj kya abhi chaahiye… aur main chhinunga thore …TUM dogi mujhe…
Rekha –
Okk … thik hai… chhoro pahale mujhe…
Madhukar –
Koi chalaki nahin … haan?
Rekha –
Hmmm
(Madhukar hath
chhor deta hai to vo usaki aankh band karati hai fir gaal par kiss karati hai.)
Rekha –
Abb khush …?
Madhukar –
Ye kyat ha… ? etana chhota sa gift aur ye girlfriend ka nahin tha…
Rekha –
To…?
Madhukar –
Ekk friend ka tha … Maamuli sa friend…
Rekha –
Areee….(jakar bed par baith jaati hai
pichhe pichhe Madhukar bhi jata hai. )
Rekha –
Tumhen dar nahin lag raha … niche etani bhir hai aur ham yahan aise…?
Madhukar –
Kya kar rahe hain…?
Rekha –
(gusse se dekhati hai)
Madhukar –
Nahin lag raha dar… aur kis se darun … main gift hi to le raha hoon….
Rekha –
Aaaahhhh … besharm ho gaye ho…
Madhukar –
(masoom banakar) aaaa … etana pyaara
sa bachcha hoon main besharm bana diya … aur mera gift bhi nahin de rahi… aaj
mera birth day bhi hai… (rone ki sakal
banata hai)
Rekha –
(Madhukar ki nakal karake) aaaa ….
Babu ko gift chahiye… kya chahiye choklate chahiye ya video game…
Madhukar –
Mujhe kiss chahiye…
Rekha –
(Rekha hansane lagati hai to madhuar gussa ho jata hai)
Rekha –
Abb kya huaa…?
Madhukar –
……….
Rekha –
Munh kyun fula liya…?
Madhukar –,………
Rekha –
Gussa ho gaye….
Madhukar –
…….
Rekha –
Thik hai tab main chalati hoon
(uthakar jane lagati hai Madhukar hath pakar
leta hai. Usaki aankhon men dekhata hai jaise kah raha ho mat jaao na please… Rekha
bhi kamajor par jaati hai. Madhukar hath khich leta hai.)
Cut
to
Scene22
/ night/party holl/ indoor
(sare gest aab
ekk ekk karake vida horahe hain)
Cut
to
Scene23/
night/ Madhurima ka bed room/Madhukar Rekha
(Rekha apana
dupatta sahi kar rahi hai aur Madhukar biyan men bed par baitha hai)
Madhukar –
Sorry yaar… mera aisa koi erada nahin tha… pata nahin kaise ho gaya…
Rekha –
……
Madhukar –
Yaar please kuchh to bol… aise chup to mat rah… kuchh to bol… galati ho gayi
mujhase yaar… Maaf kar de… tub hi to nahin roki mujhe … ekk thappar deti mujhe…
yaar kuchh to bol…
Rekha –
(paas aakar) shshshshshs…. I love you
I really love you… bas ess baat ko mat bhulana kabhi… abb main chalati hoon…
Cut
to
Scene24/night/
party hall /Madhurima aur Maa
(sab jaa chuke
hain Madhurima saf safai kar rahi thi Mummy yahin baithi thi, vahi dekhati hain
to sochati hain- abhi tak Rekha yahin thi mujhe laga
chali gayi. Vo sochati rah jati hain
aawaz lagaane se pahale hi Rekha tez tez kadamon se chali jati hai.
Cut
to
Scene25/
night/ indoor/Rekha ka bed room /Rekha
(Bed par sokar
rekh ro rahi hai)
Rekha –
Ye kya ho gya … ye kya kiya maine … aaahhhh abb kya hoga ...? … are main ro
kyun rahi hoon main to esase pyar karati hoon… vo mujhe chhor diya to… main kya
soch rahi hoon… aisa kabhi nahin hoga (roti
hai)
Flashback over
Rekha –
jisase darati thi aaj vahi kiya tumane … pyaar karane ka dava karate mujhase …
aur mere bare men kisi se kah bhi nahin paaye. (roti hai) abb main kya karun … main to jine ka soch bhi nahin paa
rahi humhare bina … ( roti hai) I
love you yaar … I love you … (roj sone se
pahale I love you type karati hai, send karati hai type karati hai, send karati
hai.)
Cut
to
Scene26/night/
indoor/ madukar ka bedroom /Madhukar
(Madhukar Rekha
ki pics dekh raha hai massage aata hai to dekhta hai aankhen jhala jhala jati
hain lekin reply nahin karata….)
Cut
to
Scene27 / day / nadi ka pul / sarak / outdoor / Rekha
( Rekha collage
ka bag li hai aur nadi ke bicho bich pul par khari hai aur paani ke bahaw ko
dekh rahi hai aisa lagata hai khud kudane ki soch rahi hai. Fir bag khol kar vo
sare gifts nikalati hai, ekk ekk karake nadi men dal deti hai, electronic album
ko pahale patak kar torati hai jab vo tut jaata hai to use bhi fek deti hai.
Kuchh der vahin khari rahati hai abb bhi lagata haijaise vo khud bhi koodane ka
soch rahi hai. Lekin fir cycle lekar ghar ki taraf chal deti hai. DiMaak men
pahale se lekar kal tak ki baten chal rahi hai. Fir ekk jagah saamane se aati
truk dekhati hai aur cycle ki raftaar barhaati hai… aankh band kar leti hai aur
man men bolati hai I love you Madhukar…
Andhera….
Cut
to
Scene
28/day/ indoor/ Madhukar ka bedroom / Madhukar
Madhukar soya
hai achanak se uth jaata hai pasine se latapath ho jaata hai saansen tez
ghabaraaya huaa. Munh se nikalata hai- Rekha… dekhata hai to bistar par hai tab pata
chala sapana tha…
Cut
to
Scene
29/ day/ outdoor/ accident spot/Rekha aur bhir
(Andhera se
ujala hota hai to Rekha khoon se latapath truk ke saamane pari hai saansen tez
tez chal rahi hain, truk driver bhaag chukka hai bhir ghere khari hai fir dhire
dhire saansen bhi khatma ho jati hai aur jab tak ambulance aati hai vo mar
chuki hoti hai)
Cut
to
Scene30
/day/indoor/ Madhukar ka bedroom/Madhukar
Madhukar
(soya hai lekin jaga huaa hai) - kyon
etani bechaini ho rahi … samajh nahin aa raha hai….
(Madhurima aati
hai)
Madhurima –
bhaiya … bhaiya…. Suttal hava kaa…? (Madhukar
sone ki acting karane lagata hai) bhaiya…
Madhukar –
Kaa hav … suttai de nai…
Madhurima –
Bhaiya … pata hav Rekha kai accident hoyi gayal…
Madhukar –
Kaa…?
Madhurima –
Haan … aur ooo…
Madhukar –
k… ka… kaa bhayal oke…?
(Madhurima rone
lagati hai Madhukar ko pakar kar)
Madhukar –
Kaa bhayal bata nai… hey… bataav…?
Madhurima –
Bhaiya oo … oo… mari gayil… (roti hai)
Madhukar –
Kaa….? (shok)
Madhurima –
Haan bhaiya….
(Madhukar jar ho
jata hai aankhen shunya ho jati hain. Vo sirf Madhurima ko jakar kar pakare hai
jo jor jor se ro rahi hai)
Cut
to
Scene
31/day/indoor/ Rekha ka ghar/bahut sare log, Madhukar,Rekha ki family
(Rekha ka shav
sajaya jar aha hai usaki Maa bahanen bhai papa sab ro rahe hain, bhir juti huyi
hai, antim yatra ki taiyaari ho rahi hai . Madhukar aata hai, dhire dhire aata
hai jaise kisi daldal men paanv rakhane jaa raha ho vaise hi bachate bachate
shunya huye hi aage barh raha hai. )
Madhukar –
(Man men sochate huye) - yah jhoot
hai vo mari nahin hai… vo mar hi nahin sakati…vo abhi uth jayegi… ye sab bas
mujhe jalaane ke liye hai … bas saja dene ke liye hai naa? … abb tum uth jao…
main sach kah raha hoon papa se baat kar lunga… haan sach kah raha hoon … main
aaj hi bat karunga… bas tum ye natak khatma karo… please uth jaao….
(Madhukar dhire
dhire aa raha hai ki Rekha ka shav dikhata hai, jo kafan usake munh ko dhake
hain ur jaata hai… Madhukar behosh ho kar gir jaata hai… sab use sambhaalane
lagate hain. Fir jitane munh utani baten hone lagati hain….)
1 –
Madhukarava kaahen behosh hoyi gayal…?
2 –
sayad Rekhava ke sath kavanon chakkar rahai…
3 –
Rekhava kai accident bhayal kii o khudai aayi gayil trakava ke nichavan…
4 –
are daraibarava ta bhaagi gayal lekin ohavan ke log kahat rahal kii ee khudai
tarakava ke samanavaan aayil rahai…
5 –
are ekar chaal chalan pahilavain se hamake thik nay lagat rahai… jab dekha
tabai Madhukarava ke sathavain rahai…
6 –
are naahin aisan kavanon baat nay rahai…
1 –
are tu kaa jaana… sahi baati hoyi…
2 -
Kahin laika oika ta nay hovai ke rahai nai…?
3 - Ke
jaanai tabai mari gayil hoyi…
4 -
Haan sahi kahat hava Madhukarava kai ta biaah tay hoyi gayal hav hamake ta sahi
lagat hav tabai mari gayil…
6 –
are naahin ho ee ta bachapanai se dekhal jaat hav ki ekai sathe rahain nai
kulli…ta…
5 –
are bachapan kai baati alag rahai le abb javaani kai ke jaanat hav….
(silent
bakavaas)
Cut
to
Scene
32/ Madhukar ka bedroom / evening/ indoor/Madhukar
(Madhukar behosh
soya hai, use dhire dhire hosh aata hai. Rekha ke sath ki baat yaad aati hai
fir kafan urate dikhata hai vo uth kar baith jaata hai. Sochata hai sapana hai.
Pani pita hai… )
Madhukar –
Aaj kitana bura bura sapana dekha maine… ghar men achchhe se baat nahin ho
paayegi baahar chal ke baat karata hoon …
(mobile lekar baahar nikalata hai)
Cut
to
Scene
33/ evening/ indoor/ Madhukar ke ghar ka hall
(hall men Madhurima,
Madhusoodan aur Maa baithe hain baaten kar rahe hain Madhukar ekk nazar dalata
bina kuchh bole nikal jana chahata hai)
Madhusoodan –
aree Madhukar … kahan jaat hava…? Abb tabiyat kaesan hav…
Madhukar –
Kahen … hamake kaa bhayal rahai…?
Maa –
ehaan aava… dekhaa jaanat hayin ki oo tohaar bachapan kai dost rahani lekin abb
kaa kari … javan oopar se likhal rahi tavan kekare haathe men hav…
Madhukar –
Maa aap kaav kahat hau … hamake kuchhu samajh men nay aavat hav…
Maa –kaa
bhayal… tu thik ta hava … dekha ho kaisan baat karat hav eke kuchhu yaad nay
hav kaa….
Madhukar –
kaav yaad naa hav…
Maa –
Rekha….
Madhukar –
kaa bhayal Rekha ke…?
Maa –
okar accident hoyi gayal nai … yaad na hav…
Madhukar –
(shok)(sapana yaad aaya) to vo sapana
nahin tha…
Madhusoodan –
sapana … are tu behosh ho gayal rahala hai okke dekhike… (Madhukar baahar jaane lagata hai) are kahan jaat havaa … ruka… Madhukar…
(lekin vo chala
jata hai)
Cut
to
Scene
34/ night/ nadi ka pul/ Madhukar,Rekha
(bike khari
karake usi ki teke lagaye baitha hai, mobile men Rekha ki pic dekhata hai aur
ro raha hai, bagal men sharab ki botal hai sarak ki rod lite hai baaki gaariyon
ki aate jaate lite hai aur shor hai.jisase Madhukar bekhabar baitha bas pics
dekh raha hai aur bich bich men botal uthakar munh se laga le raha hai. Har pic
ko zoom kar kar ke chhu chhu ke dekh raha hai jaise Rekha hi ho. Achanak se Rekha
samane vahin baithi nazar aati hai)
Rekha –
ye kya haalat bana rakhi hai tumane… tum aise karoge to kya main khush rah
paaungi…. (Madhukar bas ro raha hai koi
shabd nahin nikal raha munh se) madhu tumhari problem meri problem thi
dorahe par kaise khara karati tumhen… main jaanati hoon tum mujhase bahut pyaar
karate ho lekinapane papa se bhi karate ho… main tumhare bagair ji nahin sakati
to mar to sakati thi naa…?
Madhukar –
nahin… nahin … nahin….
Rekha –
mat rovo … tumhara rasta aasaan kar diya maine … abb tum khush raho…
Madhukar –
Nahin … nahin…
Rekha -
Khush raho tum… khush raho… (gale lagaane
jaati hai to bhi lagane jata hai lekin Rekha gaayab ho jaati hai aur vo aage ki
taraf gir jaata hai. Rekha ko saamane na dekhakar paagal ho jata hai. Khara ho
jata hai edhar udhar bhaagata hai, paagalon ki tarah khojata hai)
Madhukar
–
Rekha … Rekha… kahan chali gayi… Rekha … I love you yaar … Rekha … Rekha …Rekhaaaaaa.
Cut to
Two month later
Scene
35/evening /indoor- outdoor/Madhukar ka ghar
(Madhukar ka
ghar saja hai shadi men keval paanch din bache hain aaj tilak hai jisaki
taiyaari joro se chal rahi hai, sab khush hain, chahal pahal hai, bhagadauri
hai, tilak ki taiyaari hai jo joro se chal rahi hai, lites lagayi jaa rahi hain
mandap taiyaar kiyaa jaa raha hai, Madhusoodan sari vyavasthayen dekh rahe
hain, Maan andar ka sab kuchh sambhal rahi hai.)
Cut
to
Scene
36/night/indoor/ Madhukar ka bedroom/ Madhukar aur do dost
(Madhukar ki
sharab chhipa di gayi hai aur ghar se baahar nahin jaane diya gaya esaliye
nashe men nahin hai lekin hosh men bhi nahi hai, usake do dost hain jo use
taiyaar kar rahe hain aur vo mashin ki tarah taiyaar ho raha hai. Usake dost
bhi pareshaan hain ki aise kaise ho gaya.)
1 –
yaar kabhi hamase bhi nahin bataya ki Rekha ke sath kuchh rishta tha…
2 -
Sach men… hamen pata hota to ham jarur kuchh karate…
1 -
Yaar aise kaise chalega… jo chala gaya vo chala gaya… usake pichhe kyon paagal
bane fir rahe ho…
2 -
Kyaa bat kar raha hai… etana gahara sadama hai aise kaise thik ho jayega… shadi
ho rahi hai naa Shalini bhabhi sab thik kar degi…
1 -
Pata nahi… ye aise gumsum saa rahega yaa sharab ke nashe men rahega to vo bhi
kya kar lengi.
2 -
Kyon nahin … ekk aurat men bari Shakti hoti hai vo apane pyaar se jarur Madhukar
ko thik kar degi… jakhm abhi taja hai dhaire dhire sab thik ho jayega…
1 -
Bhagavaan Karen aisa hi ho kyon ki esaki haalat to mujhase dekhi nahin jati…
Cut
to
Scene37
/ night/ indoor-outdoor/Madhukar ka ghar
(tilak ka hall
jahan tilak charhane ke liye Shalini ke gharvaale aa rahe hain, Madhusoodan
unase milate hain aur unaka swaagat satkaar karate hain. Unako pani pilana
khana khilana sab chal raha hai.)
Cut
to
Scene38
/night/indoor/ Madhukar ka room/ Madhukar Rekha
(tilak charhane
vale aa gaye hain sunkar usake dost bahar chale jaate hain. Madhukar taiyaar ho
chukka hai vo ekk putale ki tarah baitha hai, Rekha aati hai)
Madhukar –
tum aa gayi… kabase main akela hoon … koi nahin hai mere paas… dekh rahi ho…
tumhaare bina kitana akela ho gaya hoon main…
Rekha -
Kitane smart aur handsome lag rahe ho… meri nazar naa lage… (aankhon se kaajal kan ke pichhe lagati hai)
Madhukar –
Hat … pagalaa gayi ho kyaa … mujhe tumhaari nazar bhala lag sakati hai kya…?
Rekha –
Nahin …. Kabhi nahin…. Aaj tumhari tilak hai khush nahin lag rahe ho…
(dukhi ho jata hai)
Rekha -
Hey … yahi chahate the naa tum… jo chahate the vahi to ho raha hai… tumhaare
papa ka Maan rah gaya… unaki jabaan ki laaj rakh li tumane… dekho aaj tilak hai
tumhaari….
Madhukar –
I am sorry yaar… I am really sorry… (gale
lagane jaata hai Rekha gaayab ho jaati hai)
(Madhurima aati hai)
Madhurima –
bhaiya … papa tohake niche bolaavat havain…
(apne aansu saaf karata hai aur Madhurima
ke sath niche jata hai)
Cut
to
Scene 39/ night/
outdoor/ tilak program
(tilak ka karyakarma ho raha hai
bich bich men bhir se nikalati Rekha dikh rahi hai to expression chang ho jaa
rahe hain baaki samay jaisa kaha jaa raha hai machine ki tarah kar raha hai.)
Cut
to
Scene40 /day/ indoor/ Shalini
ka bedroom/ Shalini/ Nalini/ Krishna
(Shalini apani bidai ke sare saman
ko bag men bakes men vyavasthit karake rakh rahi hai. Esamen usaki help usaki
chhoti bahan bhi kar rahi hai. Bhai bhi sath men baitha hai. Bhai Krishna ne
objerv kiya ki Madhukar thik nahin hai
papa se bhi bat kiya tha lekin vo mane nahin. Vo gahari soch men duba rahata
hai to Shalini puchh leti hai.)
Shalini –
bhaiya… bhaiya…. Kaa bhayal… aap kal se hi kuchh khoye khoye se lag rahe hain …
koi bat hai kya…?
Krishna -
Kuchh naahin… tohaar baat Madhukar se hole kaa…?
Shalini –
Naaahin … kaanhen…?
Krishna -
Hamake lagat hav oo ye sadi se khush naa hav….
Shalini –
Kaahen…?
Krishna -
Kaahen se ki kaalhin tilak men jayisan oo rahai lagat rahai ki kavanon aorai
duniya men hav jaise khoyal khoyal… hamake ta kuchh garabar lagat hav…
Shalini –
Pata nahin hamahun ke kuchh achchha nay lagat hav… lagat hav kuchh galat hot
hav… lagat have e shadi nay karai ke chahi lekin ham kese kahin… Ammin se
kahani ta oo kahaini ki tohake aisahi lagat hav… bahut logan ke dari ke karan
lagaila…
Krishna -
Pata hav ekk hi batiya du du tin tin ber kahai ke parai tab jaaike sunai jaise
nasa men rahai…
Shalini –
Sharaab orab ta nay piyat hoyi nay…
Krishna -
Pata nain… aa okar parivaar bhi jaise kuchh chhupaavat hav papa ke pata hoyi….
Shalini –
Pata nahin… onakar dost havai ta pata hovai ke chaahi….
Krishna -
Ham puchhin kaa…?
Shalini –
Bataihain….? Oota puchhale pata chali…
Krishna -
Thik ha dekha ka kahainai….?
Shalini –
Hmmmm….
Cut
to
Scene41 / Madhukar ka
ghar/ haldi kaaryakaram
(Madhukar ko haldi lagayi jaa rahi
hai baaki auraten hain jo geet gaa rahi hain. Pandit haris garava rahe hain.
Fir haldi ka karyakarm ho raha hai. Logo ki bhi lagi hai, sab log khush hain. Madhurima
aur baaki larakiyan gaa naach rahi hain. Bich bich men bhir se nikal kar Rekha
bhi aati hai naach rahi hai, balayen le rahi hai. Haldi bhi lagayi aur Madhukar
ke haathon se khud ko bhi lagavaayi. Vo use dekh kar muskura raha hai lekin
jaise hi bhir men sama jaati hai to fir machine ban jata hai.)
Cut
to
Scene42 / Shalini ka
ghar / haldi function
(Haldi aur mandap ka karyakarm sath
hi haris ka bhi gari jaati hai jisamen sab khush hai. Khushi khushi vo haldi
lagava rahi hai sab naach gaa rahe hai khush hain…)
Cut
to
Scene43 / Madhukar ka
bedroom / mehandi fanction.
(Madhukar soya huaa hai Madhurima
mehandi laga rahi hai fir chali jaati hai. Rekha aati hai tab Madhukar jagata
hai madurima ne Shalini ka naam likha thalekin Madhukar ko Rekha dikhayi deta
hai. Mehandi lage hathon se Rekha bhi milane aati hai, apani mehandi dikhati
hai.)
Rekha
– kaisi lag rahi hai…?
Madhukar -
Achchhi… bahut achchhi… bahut hi jyada achchhi… bahut bahut bahut jyaada
achchhi
( kah kar donon hansane lagate
hain, Madhukar bhi apani mehandi dikhata hai aur Rekha ka naam bhi…)
Cut
to
Scene44 / Shalini ka
ghar / mehandi function
(Shalini hare rang ka lahanga
pahane baithi hai aur use mehandi lag rahi hai)
Cut
to
Shadi ka din
Scene 45/ day/indoor-
outdoor
Shalini ka ghar saj raha hai foolon
se lite lag rahi hai. Baraatiyon ke thaharane ke liye pandal ban raha hai,
khana ban raha hai mithai ban rahi hai shadi ka mandap sajaya jaa raha hai aur
har koi khud bhi taiyaar ho raha hai )
Cut
to
Scene 46/day/ indoor-
outdoor
Madhukar ka ghar
(Khana ban raha hai barat jaane ki
taiyaari ho rahi hai. Band baaja vale aa gaye hain. Gaariyan bhi ekk ekk karake
aa rahi hain. Dulhen ki gari sajayi ja rahi hai, barat jane vale log bhi
taiyaar ho rahe hain)
Fir shuru hoti hain rasmen-
Cut
to
Scene 47/day/ outdoor
1- enaar pooja – Shalini aur Madhukar
ka ekk sath
(jisamen log band baaje ke sath sab
jaate hain, dulha dulhan ko jo chauk baithate hain vo lekar sat fera karate
hain. Fir paanch mitti ki goti (tukara) jisamen sindur lagaa hota hai, aankh
band karake kuyen men dalate hai)
Cut
to
Scene 48/evening/
indoor
2- nahane ka karyakaram – dono ka
(jisamen buaa kudaal se aangan men
vidhi karati hain aur neg leti hain. Usake baad nahalaati hain. Nahane ke bad
ekk mitti ka diya jisamen achchhat rakha jata hai jise dayen pair se forana
hota hai, var ka meta bhara jata hai jisamen dulhen ki Maa ke baal se paani
hota huaa bête ke sar par jata hai fir ekk matake men bhara jata hai. Jise pack
karake dulhan ke liye jata hai.)
Cut
to
Scene 49/ evening/
outdoor/ in mandap
3 - nehachhuaa ka karyakaram – dono
ka
(jisamen dulha dulhan shadi ke
kapare men hath jor kar hath men chaval lekar mandap men baithate hain. Naen
pair rangati hai aur baki ghar vale paise dete hain.)
Cut
to
Scene 50/
evening/indoor/ Shalini ka bedroom/ Shalini, parllar didi
Dulhan ka makeup shuru
4 - Shalini abb jayMaal ke liye
taiyaar ho rahi hai, paarlar vali aakar use taiyaar kar rahi hai aur baki log
bhi taiyaar ho rahe hain.
Cut
to
Scene 51/ day/ indoor/ Madhukar
ka room/ Madhukar, Rekha, do dost
5 -Madhukar bhi taiyaar kiya jaa
raha hai usake dost taiyaar kar rahe hai, Rekha usaki aankhon se door nahin ho
rahi hai, aaj bhi usane kajal lagaya …
Cut
to
Scene52/ evening/
outdoor/ barat ka karyakaram
6
- puri taiyaari
ke sath barat chal rahi byaahane ko. Madhurima
ki hi gari men baithi hai sarahad ke paar parichhan huaa naach gana huaa hansi
Mazak huaa fir barat nikalati hai Shalini ke ghar ki taraf…
Cut
to
Scene 53/night/ indoor/
Shalini, Mummy, papa, Krishna
(Shalini taiyaar ho chuki hai,
apani Mummy ko dekhi nahin to bahan se puchhati hai.)
Shalini –
are Nalini… Ammi kidhar gayil … kab se dikhayi naa det hav…
Pata
nahin kahin hoyi edharai…
(fir vo dhoodhati huyi nikalati hai…
ekk jagah usake pair ruk gaye… kamara Ammi papa ka tha sath men bhai bhi tha,
bhai gussa ho raha hai)
Krishna -
papa tuhun kaa gajab bat karat hava… oo aashik laika javane kai girlfriend
rahai au oo doo mahina pahile mari gayil okar shok manaavat hav. O se tu Shalini
kai sadi karat hava…
Papa –
chup chup.. yahi naate aela hai puchhai… aaj ketana din se mana karat rahani
hai lekin enake ( Ammi ki taraf eshara karake) bhoot savaar bhayal hav… aajai
enahun ke rovayi aavati hav…
Ammi –
ka Karin… hamase bardasht naa hot hav… aaj lagat hav kuchh galat hot hav, Shalini
ke sathe… pata naa hin kaahen… kuchh achchha naa lagat hav … a aesan laeka se
shadi karat hava ki javan laeki ke moh men paral hav…
Papa –
are uta mari gail hav agar jiyat rahat ta naa karit… aur Madhusoodanon etana
lachaar bhayal havain ki ka karay… onahun kai munh dekhal naa jaat hav…
Ammi –
ta onake laachari men apanai bitiya dav pe lagaay deba…
Papa –
daav pe kahan … sadiya ta pahilavai se tay rahai… onahun se galati bhail…
pahilavai puchhi lehale hotain ta aaj etani bari galati naa bhail hot…
Krishna -
sab ta thik hav papa … lekin kaa oo Shalini ke khush rakhi payi…?
Papa –
pata nai… abahin ta Shalini ke sabr se kam levai ke pari… time lagi… lekin samay
hav…bara se bara ghaav bhari delaa…
Ammi –
ee apane dost ke betava ke thik karai khaatir aapan bitiya kurbaan karat havai…
Papa –
are aesan naa hav… sab kuchh tay hoyi gayal rahai… ketana badanaami hot .
Krishna -
papa tu aaj bataavat hava hamake nahin ta ee sadi ham naa hovai deit…
Papa –
are paagal hava ka … abb situation aisan aai gayil hav ki javan hot hav tavan
hovai daa…
Ammi –
hamare Shalini kai kismet aisan kharab hav ki ham ka kahin… bas bhagavaan se
binate kail jaay sakat hav ki oo sab thik karai…
Krishna -
papa Shalini ke bhi shak havai ki kuchh garabar hav… onake bataay deyin …
kaahen se chhupaaib thik naa hav.
Papa –
are naahin… oonase kuchh mati kahiha… pahilavain se rovat
Gavati hayin auru marai lagihain.
Ammi –
Shalini khatir ham kaa kahin… jaani bujhi ke inaare men dhakelal jaat hav…
aisan kehu ke nai karai bhagavaan… a ee kuli tohare dosti ke karan hot hav.
Papa –
gussa nai dilava ekk hi baat bar bar kahi ke … bataava kavanon dusar rasta
rahai… aaany … kaa hamare chinta na hav Shalini kai , lekin kaa Karin… aaany
batava … aajai mana kai dein ki barati leike mati aava… mana kai dein…?
Krishna -
papa please gussa mat hova … abb ta sach men kuchh naa hoyi sakat hav… lekin Shalini
ke batay devai ke chahi… onake pata rahai ke chaahi ki kese onakar biyaah hot
hav… naahin ta dhokha hoyi ee, hai naa..?
Papa –
jaa … bataay daa … sabhen ta samajhdarai hoyi gayal hava jaa batay da… sabase
jyada tohaiin logan ke chinta hav nai ta jaa batay da.. baithal kaahen hava ja
batay daa…
(Shalini
sab sun leti hai fir vapas aakar apane kamare men baith jati hai)
Cut
to
Scene 54/night/
outdoor-indoor/ barat swaagat
Barat
aati hai, dvaar pooja hota hai fir Madhukar stage par jata hai jayMaal ke liye)
Scene 55/ night/inddor/
Shalini
(Shalini
pata nahin chalane nahin deti ki sab jan chuki hai. Taiyaari karake jayMaal ke
liye nikalati hai. Machine bane Madhukar baitha hai. Shalini varmala liye
nikalati hai. Madhukar ki nazar jaati hai to vo use Rekha nazar aati hai vo
khush ho jata hai, insan ban jata hai dharakane chalane lagati hain. Lagata hai
ki haan shadi ho rahi meri fir Shalini dikhati hai fir sab shant ho jata hai)
Cut
to
Scene 56/night/ shadi
ka karyakaram
(abb
Shalini ko pata hai vo abb usaka poora sahayog de rahi hai jahan vo rukata
usase khud karavaati. Hindu riti rivaj se jo UP bihaar men hoti hai, se
sampanna hoti hai ess bich har samay Rekhadikhati hai. kabhi mandap men Shalini
ki jagah... jab Shalini dikhati hai to Rekha mandap ke bahar dikhati hai. jab
dikhayi deti hai tab hosh men hota nahin to gumsum sa hai.
(sindurdaan
ke samay jab sindur pahanaane ko uthata hai to sabase pahale Rekha dikhi to ruk
jata hai.
Madhusoodan –
kya huaa?
(aur
Shalini khud usaki taraf dekhati jo abhi tak aankhen band kiye sindur bharane
ka intajaar kar rahi thi)
Madhusoodan –
senhoor pahirava…. Fir vo sindur pahana
deta hai. Jab vapas apani jagah baithata hai to Rekha mandap ke baahar jaati
huyi dikhati hai.)
Shadi
ho jati hai fir baki ki rasmen hoti hain
Cut
to
Scene 57night/ indoor/ Shalini,
Madhukar, Nalini, bhir
dulha dulhan kohabar jaate hain. Sab log khush
hain Nalini ko kuchh pata nahin hai esaliye vo sabase jyada chahak rahi hai
lekin abb Shalini Madhukar ki halat se vakif hai vo pura saport kar rahi hai.
Use dekhate huye sochati hai.
Shalini
(sochate huye) - kaun thi Rekha jisase aap etana pyaar pyaar karate the… main
usake jitana pata nahin pyaar kar paaungi yaa nahin…. Use bhoolaane men to
nahin usake gam se bahar nikalane men main puri madad karungi aapki… bahut
pyaar karungi aapse bahut jyada … chahe aap mujhase Karen yaa na karen… nahin…
ekk din jarur aayega… jab aapako bhi
mujhase pyaar ho jayega… vada karati hoon main aapase …
Cut
to
Scene58 / morning /
bidai
(Shalini ki bidai ho rahi sab ro rahe hain.
Bidai ki rasma huyi. Shalini gari men baithi… hajaar sapane lekar sasural ki
taraf chali. Gari chal rahi thi dulhan ki gari aage hai baki ki gariyan pichhe
sab ghar pahuchane ki soch rahe the.
Cut
to
Scene59 /morning/
indoor-outdoor/ Madhukar ka ghar
Dulhan
ke swagat ki taiyaari ho rahi hai. Dal ki puri ban rahi hai phone aa chukka tha
ki bidai ho chuki hai ekadh ghanta lagega sab ghar pahunch jaayenge. Dulhan
utarane ke liye chauk bhi pura gaya hai. Abb sab besabri se intajar kar rahe
hain. Rat men naach gana karane ki vajah se kuchh log so rahe hain kuchh log
naha chuke hain, kuchh log jaa rahe hain. Dulha dulhan ki puri taiyaari ho
chuki hai kisi bhi vakt gari aa jayegi.
Cut
to
Scene 60/morning/
outdoor/ in car/ Madhukar, Rekha, Shalini, driver/accident spot
Gari
raftaar se ghar ki taraf chali jaa rahi hai. Madhukar ke dimak men Rekha chal
rahi hai vo usi ke bare men soch raha hai. Jab Shalini ki taraf dekhata hai to Rekha
nazar aati hai. Dhyaan se dekhata hai to Shalini hai fir samane dekhata hai to
bahar dikhayi deti hai jo laal jore men khari hai,
Madhukar
(ghabaraya huaa)- are bacho… samane dekho … samane dekho…
(driver
samajh nahi paya)
Driver –
ka … ka… kahat hava….?
Madukar –
areeee samane dekho …
(driver
achakchaaya aur gari unbailence huyi. Samane se aati huyi ekk truk men ghus
gayi. Shalini alag giri pari hai khoon se latpath. Madhukar vahin gira hai
jahan do mahine pahale Rekha giri thi. Shalini ko orhi huyi chunari Madhukar ke
opar thi. Shalini turant khatm ho gayi lekin Madhukar ki sansen chal rahi hain.
Vo kahin dekh raha hai jahan use Rekha dikhayi deti hai. Baki ki gariyan aa
jati hain. Log daurate hain. Kuchh log Shalini ke paas kuchh Madhukar ke paas
kuchh driver ke paas. )
Madhukar
tez tez sansen le raha hai, usake munh se ekk naam nikal raha hai- re… re… Rekhaa…
aur vah bhi shunya ho jata hai.
Sabhi
log ghere khare hai…
Cut
to
Scene61/ morning/
indoor- outdoor
Madhukar ka ghar/
Swagat
ki taiyaari ho rahi hai (pic clik end gray)
Cut
to
Scene 62/ morning/
indoor- outdoor
Shalini ka ghar/
(bidai
ho chuki hai sab jagah jagah baithe hain… (pic clik and gray)
Cut
to
Scene 63/day/
outdoor/sarak/bhir
Accident spot/
Sabhi
ghere khare hain pic clik end news paper ki khabar . hade line bani- Rekha ne
banayi Shalini ke shadi ki chunari ko Madhukar ka kafan.
Cut
to
Scene 64/day/ indoor /
classroom/ laraki
Zoomout
aur vo paper ekk barah saal ki laraki ke samane hai jo uss khabar ko parh rahi
hai.
The
end
Name
-ARCHANA YADAV
Address- THANE MAHARASHTRA
Contact no- 7905819455
E mail ID- archanahdevi@gmail.com
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